Following are a couple of minor 'typo' type matters for consideration:
MOS MDA definition - change the word 'attitude' to 'altitude'
MOS Table 2.03 (4) does not show the criteria for Class G VMC
Page 51 - Add definition for IRCC
MOS 13.01 (Last IFR should be VFR)
(2) For the definition in regulation 91.365 of specified VFR cruising level for a track, section 13.04 prescribes the cruising level for an aircraft in an IFR flight on the track.
25.02 (7) Listening watch
(7) For the purpose of making required reports and broadcasts, the PIC of an aircraft in an operation below 5 000 ft in Class G airspace:
(a) must maintain a listening watch on the area VHF; and
(b) if necessary for the safety of the operation — must maintain a listening watch on frequencies other than the area VHF.
Please compare with table 30.80 (1) where there is no requirement to carry a radio below 5000 feet except in a CTAFR area.
IFR aircraft should be required to carry 2 radios or a radio capable of monitoring a second frequency, so they can monitor CTAF frequency on arrival to improve their situational awareness, as well as communicate on the area frequency.
MOS Table 30.06 (2) requires magnetic heading equipment as follows;
The system must be:
(a) a direct reading magnetic compass; or
(b) a remote indicating compass and a standby direct reading magnetic compass.
It would seem more than appropriate in this day and age to add a (c) that allows some combination of 2 or more remote indicating compasses without the need for a direct reading magnetic compass?
MOS page 146 - Fig 30.64 TAS RA actually shows Snowy RA